Wednesday, March 16, 2005The Shot Hit
I recorded a song tonight. For some reason it's a father singing to his young daughter about her mother leaving them. Don't ask me. I don't get it either. Go here and listen to "Cradle".
Enjoy! Have Fun!
posted by Samuel @ 9:52 PM
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1 Comments:
Really liked the music, not so much the lyrics.
Luke P | Homepage | 03.17.05 - 2:46 am | #
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agree with the lyrics comment. i think you could cut the last chorus too. but i really like the seventh beatlesy chords, and the beat. sometimes the trumpets. and when you strike things on the 1-2-3-4 instead of the shuffle every once in a while. i think in this song the verse is much more interesting than the chorus. and i think you really have to be careful about getting away from the beat. but on the whole i like the song.
Paul | Homepage | 03.17.05 - 2:58 am | #
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Yea I don't like the lyrics either. I just wanted a vocal melody and couldn't decide what to do last night so I wrote em quick. They're actually not trumpets they're saxophones and I yea I don't like the chorus either.
SamB | 03.17.05 - 9:45 am | #
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You should be writing lyrics all the time if you want to take this shit to the next level.Sorry. Just 'Keeping it real".
Luke P | Homepage | 03.18.05 - 12:44 pm | #
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